I'm not quite done with it, but I've got to say the first half....isn't bad. You're editing is pretty tight. It's nicely paced. Your opening titles are impressive. It's nice to see that you made good use of locations.
The dialogue is a bit bad and the delivery is stilted, but you work with what you got.
Next time around, you should invest in some lights (even cheap ones would be fine for this kind of project) and a mic (again, even a cheap one would help tremendously). And that's the biggest .22 I've ever seen
I'll keep watching and try to give some more feedback.
