Feature Horror - Fury (FilmMaker Wanted)

[Muse32]

Title: Fury

Length: 122 Pages Long

Genre: Psychological Horror

Written by: Peter Pearson

Plot Outline: The story is about a recovering alchoholic, and who's dark past will soon come back to haunt him and his family.

Log Line: Christ came to Save the Sinners... He came to Punish them.

Plans: Get made by an Indie FilmMaker, and get the original piece made to start off my IMDB.

Direct Link to View it

Looking for some Feedback to move the story forward in the right direction (i think it needs another re-write). Then when it's ready, get the script into a possible FilmMakers hands and put into production.

This has been finished for the past 2 months, I've only recently decided to put it up on the forum for the need of feedback and constructive criticism.

[mrbender]

Great will read!

[Muse32]

Great will read!

Great, Cheers

[mrbender]

just started looks Great!!

[Muse32]

just started looks Great!!

Glad to see someone is taking time to read it, cheers Bender

[Muse32]

Just sorting out a Revision, link will be back soon

[Poot Bort]

Just sorting out a Revision, link will be back soon

Did I get the revised version? I've lost track of the dates...

[Muse32]

You got the early revision, though I've worked alot on my Descriptive writing and formatting, and will you hit you back when it's finished. I've been without a computer for 2 months, so it's took a serious set back with having it re-written; hence the reason for my inactivity.

[Poot Bort]

You got the early revision, though I've worked alot on my Descriptive writing and formatting, and will you hit you back when it's finished.

Cool, just send me the new version whenever you get the chance. I didn't get far with the first version, because I've been swamped with getting "deliverables" ready for my own movie. (I'll go into details in my own thread.)

[Muse32]

No worries, I'll have a revised version up soon, just re-writing the action scenes and adding in some more descriptive writing to give it more of a feel.