"Coming Soon" a Short Film by James Burns

[WSN Productions]

Here is a film i just finished, tell me what you think:

http://www.wsnproductions.com/index.php?wnp=comingsoon

Be honest!

[secrecyguy]

That's pretty cool from the first few minutes I watched. When I have time, I will watch the whole thing and than give you my thoughts.

[secrecyguy]

ok.. I watched the whole thing. It was good but could have been better though. I give it 3 stars out of 5.

I feel you could have added more stuff to the story for example, when you fade out, you could have him said, "Who turn off the lights?" and he could have also said, "Where is the music coming from?".

Than film could have been even more funny.

As for the movie trailer voice guy, he almost got his voice down.

I think it will work better if you found a look alike for the guy.

[Tasty Human]

ok.. I watched the whole thing. It was good but could have been better though. I give it 3 stars out of 5.

I feel you could have added more stuff to the story for example, when you fade out, you could have him said, "Who turn off the lights?" and he could have also said, "Where is the music coming from?".

Than film could have been even more funny.

As for the movie trailer voice guy, he almost got his voice down.

I think it will work better if you found a look alike for the guy.

[Johnny Knoxville]

That Was really good!!!

May I ask you how you've made your company intro?

[WSN Productions]

That Was really good!!!

May I ask you how you've made your company intro?

Blender CGI.

[WSN Productions]

Here is another cut:

http://www.vimeo.com/1225601

Better or worse?