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Muse32
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« on: January 14, 2008, 11:12:32 AM »
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Short Story


This is a Short story based on a scene i written in my screenplay, just messing about I'd though I'll make it to see how it turned out.

It's only roughly 3 1/2 minutes long.

The song in it is an original song by my mate, Joseph Wood, and its called 'Ghost.

Hope you like it, any feedback is welcome Smiley

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« Reply #1 on: January 14, 2008, 04:15:23 PM »
i think this thread should be named TUMBLEWEED!!!

Yes hank, i've hjacked your thread title of ROTG because my thread is doing worser Cheesy
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« Reply #2 on: January 14, 2008, 05:18:54 PM »
You did nothing but steal pictures and add music that wasn't yours.


What do you want people to comment on?
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« Reply #3 on: January 14, 2008, 05:28:38 PM »
hahaha thanks Tongue

I need the pictures to tell the story, i don't have actors etc...

The music is my mates, and its the music I wanted to use for the scene on the proper scene.

I'm simply just working with what I've got... nothing, to produce something! Smiley also called working with ya initiative Wink
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« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2008, 11:06:18 PM »
Not to bad
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